
I finished the 2nd revision to the story last night and will soon be sending it off to my cohort for their approval. From the get-go I had hoped that the story would be complete on the first try without need for major story alterations but I guess that was nothing more than a pleasant dream.
The above images are concepts for the various antagonists in the story. The word 'concept' is a little misleading because I don't see the final versions being much different than these two.





